Dream Poem

[Jennifer]

The mind surveys its treasures
panoramic pleasures
it chooses one to answer
chooses one to stop

Intruder wakes inside and leaves
another sticks in the web he weaves
and pulls the veil tighter round
Beloved hears
a finer sound

[Sigmund]

smiling in appreciation.  cheers.

[juergen]

...poetic dream, of someone approaching operating temperature, so it seems.

Warming!

[Jennifer]

Thank you, Sigmund and Juergen, your appreciation brings a laugh to my lips and a smile to my heart.  Used to write a lot of poetry when I was younger, but this is the first in almost 20 years, so i appreciate the feedback!
Namaste,
Jen

[juergen]

Your poem was the last piece i took in before sleep, and my first thought when i awoke, and the next thing was i went online...

The right heart beat can make a total difference, maybe the little piece is the entry in Your 'blue period'; then no one will can say, You were not admired before You went crazily famous and that all

The right heart beat or a good drummer can make all the difference!

juergen